Paige, I love this idea! It's totally awesome. The part where the ball is struggling to make his way across the floor is working really well. What needs a little lovin' is what happens leading up the ball getting squashed. I think it needs a little more anticipation. Does it hesitate before it jumps off the platform? Also, I feel like there needs to be more reason it should squash instead of bounce. Maybe you could start it off on the ground already and a big giant ball comes out of nowhere and bounces on it, leaving it flat. Or something else falls on it, or maybe it falls from higher up... There are a lot of things you could do, just to sell the idea you are going for. Otherwise, keep going, I can't wait to see the next pass!
Paige, I love this idea! It's totally awesome. The part where the ball is struggling to make his way across the floor is working really well. What needs a little lovin' is what happens leading up the ball getting squashed. I think it needs a little more anticipation. Does it hesitate before it jumps off the platform? Also, I feel like there needs to be more reason it should squash instead of bounce. Maybe you could start it off on the ground already and a big giant ball comes out of nowhere and bounces on it, leaving it flat. Or something else falls on it, or maybe it falls from higher up... There are a lot of things you could do, just to sell the idea you are going for. Otherwise, keep going, I can't wait to see the next pass!
ReplyDeleteAwesome, great suggestions! I will brainstorm some more ways to help the aniticipation and idea of the squash.
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